Lsuanli
(1) The page has same problem with my page, no figures, need to figure out how to put a figure on the page and arrange layout.
(2) For the "Formation" section, it can be more detail.
(3) Typing error, "79.3x10^6 km^2".
(1) Need a paragraph before contents
(2) Need a map shows location of Yellowknife Bay on Mars
(3) Can Split section "Yellowknife Bay Geology: into several sub-sections, like rock types, structural features and sedimentary environments etc.
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Review page https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yellowknife_Bay,_Mars, on 4/4/2013
edit(1) There are some bad links on the page (2) I have a question, David, how can I add my page a title like yours? (3) Can better organize the page, firstly tell the reason why scientist chose this area (what's their motivations?). Then introduce recent discoveries. Finally, talk about future exploration proposals.
Review page https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ghost_craters_on_Mercury, on 4/4/2013
edit(1) Add image show tectonic features (i.e. graben and Wrinkle ridges) (2) For the original figure, topography at two sides of the ghost crater looks too rugged. (3) The last section "Importance", mainly talk about implications for planet tectonics, how about just change the section name to Implications for planets tectonics
(1) Need an original figure. (2) Need images in Gallery section (3) Need a image show what's Accruva Formation
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