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Happy editing! Indyguy (talk) 18:49, 4 December 2023 (UTC)

To add to the above, you need to use reliable sources that are independent of the article's subject. It appeared to me that at least some of the sources you're trying to use are press releases issued by the school itself. Even though you tried to put the information in your own words, the non-encyclopedic style of those sources remained. That is, flowery congratulatory phrases do not belong in a neutral encyclopedia.

Also, to enter a reference source, you need to enclose it in tags so that it appears as a footnote. Indyguy (talk) 18:57, 4 December 2023 (UTC)

Hi There.

I want to strip this page down to the minimum functional page. I'm an MBA student and I'm learning this needs to be written more like an academic paper with it's own citation style. I think I can figure it out!

If I remove all links except the following sources and if I cite them with the proper tags, is there a chance of approval?

https://www.perkinseastman.com/projects/concordia-international-school-shanghai/

https://theexcelligent.com/Concordia-International-School-of-Shanghai.html

https://www.relocatemagazine.com/dir-c-concordia-international-school-shanghai

https://www.newsweek.com/insights/leading-international-schools-2021/concordia-international-school-shanghai

https://www.relocatemagazine.com/dirc-8099

I'm grateful for any advice you can provide.

Thank you, LifeIsNow001 (talk) 05:15, 17 January 2024 (UTC)