Lgay124

Peer Review By: Jeffrey Camille

This article is well-written, needing only moderate revisions to ensure it effectively summarizes the topic of transgender asylum seekers while abiding by Wikipedia’s regulations and class instructions. The article’s major strength lies in the pooled references, all of which come from reliable sources. These provide a trove of information that is successfully used throughout the text to offer well-rounded summaries of various issues and events. However, the sheer volume of information shared can sometimes take away from an otherwise concise text. Therefore, I recommend reviewing the “Country of origin” section to identify spaces where information can be better summarized, relocated, or cut. The remaining two sections could benefit from more information. The inclusion of images will also prove positive when rendering your final draft. Be conscious that when images are used, they should be additive to your summary, not there simply for display. I also wish to highlight that, at times, refugees and asylum seekers are used as analogues when, in fact, they are not. Making sure the difference is explained and that the correct word is utilized at the right moment is important. Overall, I asses this article’s completeness level as being well-developed. J.camSP23 (talk) 04:30, 12 April 2023 (UTC)

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