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Hello, Ksaraa, and Welcome to Wikipedia!

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Hey there! Thank you for article on Corey D. Taylor! I'm sorry you're feeling frustrated - the wikipedia system can be pretty rough at first, but it gets better!

I went through your article and added title to the citations - if you want to do it in the future, add a parameter |title= to the citation, followed by whatever the title of the page is. Also, don't worry about signing sections in articles, that's only for talk pages.

As for getting the article accepted, you're doing good so far - I really appreciate the additions you've made since the last submission. Unfortunately, it's not quite there yet. Some of your sources are videos or sources published by the subject, which aren't what we're looking for - are there are reliable, third-party sources that cover your subject? See WP:42 for more info on that.

Finally, don't get discouraged! I know this process is pretty frustrating, but keep plugging away and hopefully your article can be accepted. Let me know if there is anything I can do to help. Thanks again! --Cerebellum (talk) 18:04, 26 October 2012 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation

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Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved.