Kathleenvoight

Peer Review

It looks really good overall! I think your edits were very helpful for increasing the quality of the info. A couple notes:

1. In your mythology section, I would recommend firming up your language of Suns vs Worlds vs other. It would help an uniformed reader understand better if you picked a single word, defined it in this context, and used it throughout.
   • Also your capitalization of "Fifth world" vs "fourth sun" etc, is inconsistent. Easy fix though!
2. In Archeological Records, add "the" before moon pyramid.
3. For "Cult and Rites" go back and add more citations. Especially for the last one, which says citation needed
4. consider either proposing in talk page to remove the templates for "factual accuracy" and "no citations", or take the initiative to do so yourself. While I cannot definitively say the factual accuracy is done, the no citations has met the requirements
   • updating the template markers is good because it tells a new reader that what they are seeing is more trustworthy than if the template is still there. And since you've done the hard work of pulling in primary sources and secondary commentaries, the info is actually trustworthy.

Great stuff though! Benito (talk) 03:10, 9 October 2018 (UTC)

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