User talk:KJ18818/sandbox

Annotated Bibliography

KJ18818, excellent work so far. I think with the sources you have and the plans you've outlined to improve the article (especially the creation of new sections), you can transform this into a very good article. I noticed that your article strangely has one of your sources listed (Lintott), but doesn't actually cite that source. Very odd, but just another example of how it needs to be improved. The changes you've proposed are quite comprehensive, so I'm looking forward to seeing your work over the course of this semester. Grade: 10/10 Gardneca (talk) 18:05, 21 February 2020 (UTC)