Hey I just reviewed your article! You definitely need to expand your article to those topics you have left in blank. Also you need to link your article to other Wikipedia articles in order for it to stop being an orphan.--Jdguevara14 (talk) 23:09, 10 November 2011 (UTC)
Article Review: The information and illustrations you have in your article are great so far. Like Juan said, you just need to expand on the specific sections and link your article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by BenChilton (talk • contribs) 22:55, 15 November 2011 (UTC)
Before this course, I mainly used wikipedia for looking up random facts that I would wonder about. Although, I would never use it for school and I would never trust it in situations where it could be wrong.
If people were to follow me they would see someone who was interested in psychology. Not just the mainstream psychology, but also someone who was interested in the smaller things, more detailed. This person is fairly credible, but still has much to learn.
I could put even more effort into my articles, and make more changes that I have personal experience with so I know first hand about the topic.
Welcome!
editGreetings...
Hello, Jw07334, and welcome to Wikipedia!
- To get started, click on the green welcome.
- I hope you like it here and decide to stay!
- Happy editing! Sophus Bie (talk) 14:20, 31 August 2011 (UTC)
- I hope you like it here and decide to stay!
P.S. If you're enjoy Dr. Who, you might be interested in WikiProject Doctor Who.
- You're welcome; I'm glad I could help! Good luck with your class, and if you have any problems, feel free to drop by my talk page. If I'm not online, the folks over at the help desk can answer any of your questions too. Sophus Bie (talk) 13:24, 2 September 2011 (UTC)
Hey there
editHi, Jw07334, I was wondering if you were going to do any more editing on the Visual Cliff page. My colleagues and I picked out that page to edit for a Sensation and Perception class. Please let me know. Thanks, PsychLove13 (talk) 17:36, 28 September 2011 (UTC)PsychLove13
Some tips to help you out!
editHi Jw07334, I thought I'd drop a few notes on your talk page with some help on writing articles :o)
First of all, it may be best for you to do a bit of reading, starting with the Wikipedia manual of style, which will give you a lot of information about how Wikipedia prefers its articles to be written. It's not as hard to follow as it might look; quite a bit of the information there probably won't be vital for you at first.
Second, I recommend you make a user sandbox - which is just an area you can use to practise in, and to make notes in, and to get things ready in. If you click this red link: user:Jw07334/Sandbox, that will let you create that page (it gives you an edit window to start work in). Anything, anywhere, on the help and information pages which gives you an example, try it out in your sandbox until you're familiar with it.
For your article, the next thing you want to do is start collecting as much information as you can about it. Google searches (particularly in Books and Scholar) will be your best friend for this! Once you've found the information, the next most important thing is to start writing up each fact in your own words (very important, this), and make a note at the same time of exactly where that information came from. Build in the references as you go along; I'm going to copy in, down below this, a whole heap of help on doing references, which was produced by one of our best teachers (Chzz).
Here's another place that you'll find incredibly useful - citation templates which you can copy and paste into your sandbox, between <ref></ref> tags; you just fill in the blanks from your sources into the template, and you'll end up with nicely formatted inline citations :o) It all helps. Remember to add a references section to your sandbox (make a new line, and put ==References== on it, and type {{reflist}} on the next line, so that you can see how your citations look as you do them. Remember to save your page often! You don't want to lose your work.
Hopefully this will give you a good start and make life easier for you.
One last thing to keep as a motto: "It's better to write one good, well-referenced, nicely-presented article than it is to create fifty unreferenced one-line stubs!" Pesky (talk …stalk!) 12:45, 12 November 2011 (UTC)
How references work
editSimple references
editThese require two parts;
- a)
Chzz is 98 years old.<ref> "The book of Chzz", Aardvark Books, 2009. </ref> He likes tea. <ref> [http://www.nicecupofteaandasitdown.com Tea website] </ref>
- b) A section called "References" with the special code "{{reflist}}";
== References == {{reflist}}
(an existing article is likely to already have one of these sections)
To see the result of that, please look at user:chzz/demo/simpleref. Edit it, and check the code; perhaps make a test page of your own, such as user:Jw07334/reftest and try it out.
Named references
editChzz was born in 1837. <ref name=MyBook> "The book of Chzz", Aardvark Books, 2009. </ref> Chzz lives in Footown.<ref name=MyBook/>
Note that the second usage has a / (and no closing ref tag). This needs a reference section as above; please see user:chzz/demo/namedref to see the result.
Citation templates
editYou can put anything you like between <ref> and </ref>, but using citation templates makes for a neat, consistent look;
Chzz has 37 Olympic medals. <ref> {{Citation | last = Smith | first = John | title = Olympic medal winners of the 20th century | publication-date = 2001 | publisher = [[Cambridge University Press]] | page = 125 | isbn = 0-521-37169-4 }} </ref>
Please see user:chzz/demo/citeref to see the result.
For more help and tips on that subject, see user:chzz/help/refs.
Here's a little bit of magic which can save you an awful lot of time and effort!
editYou might want to consider using this tool - (tools:~dispenser/cgi-bin/webreflinks.py) - it makes your life a whole heap easier, by filling in complete citation templates for your links. All you do is install the script on Special:MyPage/common.js, or or Special:MyPage/vector.js, then paste the bare url (without [...] brackets) between your <ref></ref> tabs, and you'll find a clickable link called Reflinks in your toolbox section of the page (probably in the left hand column). Then click that tool. It does all the rest of the work (provided that you remember to save the page! It doesn't work for everything (particularly often not for pdf documents), but for pretty much anything ending in "htm" or "html" (and with a title) it will do really, really well all by itself. For those it can't do by itself, it gives you a pull-down (or up) menu of templates to choose from, which you can then fill in manually. Often the problem is "No title found" - sometimes the title is obvious (especially if it's a pdf), bit, if not, just open the page yourself and choose something appropriate if there's not already a clear title there. Happy editing! Pesky (talk …stalk!) 12:45, 12 November 2011 (UTC)