Jfox252

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:12, 24 January 2020 (UTC)

Peer Review. For starters, I am quite impressed your group decided to work on a topic that does not have a wikipedia page! I think you guys did a great job covering a sensitive topic that can stir up a lot of emotions, and covering it in a very neutral and informative way. I think the organization, headers, and writing flow all quite nicely, which is something I now feel my group can improve on. For a very small nitpick, I believe there is a hyphen missing for the number thirty-two listed under the "Background" heading. I checked some of your citations and they do lead to neutral content that you have summarized quite well in your draft, and the sheer amount of citations leaves me under the impression this would be considered as notable by Wikipedia's guidelines (I hope your final draft gets published!). I believe the addition of some images that correlate to the topics you address could be beneficial into bringing these issues to life and adding colour, which is something my group and I could also apply to our draft to improve it. Overall, for a first draft you guys have done a very good job and I can't to see your final draft. Just a repost from the talk page on your sandbox. Apryo574 (talk) 17:49, 7 March 2020 (UTC)