Hlc9898
Joined 3 October 2017
Latest comment: 6 years ago by Shalor (Wiki Ed) in topic Welcome!
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WikiProj Assign 3 edit
- I would probably find more information about the frequency range since there isn't much about that yet on the page. That part also hasn't been updated since 2014, so there might be new findings of the frequency ranges with photodetectors. There is also an unreliable source that someone has mentioned, so maybe find a source that is reliable.
- Most of this page is being dominated by the building design part of the article, so I would find more information about the other topics that are also in the article so that it's not imbalanced. There is very little about Poland, which could probably be added to since they just enacted their act in 2016, so we could see how it has affected the country in a years time.
Grid-connected photovoltaic power system
- This article needs a lot of extra sources that are reliable and not just random sources. I might want to add information about how this system contributes to solar power and maybe sustainability. This article only talks about how the sun helps it in one small section, so maybe add more about that in the article. Hlc9898 (talk) 06:48, 24 October 2017 (UTC)
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