Hewaiualani

Eng 22 Class Page

See the Eng 22 class page here: User:Eng22

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Good start

Good job posting your first sentence.

Mr Turner --Eng22 (talk) 04:09, 9 July 2008 (UTC)

1st draft comments

Good work so far. Remember to add references to your sources at the end of each sentence. You do this by adding parenthetical references which basically is the last name of the author of the reference. If there is no author, use the first two or three words of the title as your reference.

Refer to the following for overall guidance on writing the article.

• Wikipedia:Good_article_criteria
• MLA citation style

==Mr Turner --Eng22 (talk) 19:56, 10 July 2008 (UTC)

HawaiiHistory.org

Hi. Nice work, but I wanted to let you know that the "HawaiiHistory.org" site has been found to contain unreliable information due to its status as a user-generated website. For this reason, I have removed the URL from the article on Theodore Heuck. It should be easy to find the same information in a more reliable reference work. Thanks for your good work. Viriditas (talk) 20:47, 8 December 2008 (UTC)