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You have a lot of information already! Make sure you provide citations for the statistics in the intro about The Department of Education investigation and for the line in the intro about the spokeswoman for the NJ Department of Education! Also watch out for some spelling errors,sentence fragments, and capitalization issues in your paragraphs. I wanted to point this out since your writing is in final draft form of separate paragraphs, and not notes or bullet points. It would also be helpful to link the charter schools mentioned to their websites. Just make sure that you are citing or provided a link for each statistic, fact, or study you mention in your writing. There are multiple statements that appear to be unsupported by a reference. Another possible extension for your writing could be talking about what the effect of the shift to charter schools has been for Camden, the students, and families (just remember to be unbiased). Another suggestion or idea would be to add more of a history of education in Camden, or what education was like before the 2103 switch, where your article starts. For an uninformed reader, who is completely unaware of what education was like before the charter schools came along, to give context and something to which they can be compared. Hmb97 (talk) 20:48, 16 November 2016 (UTC)
Congratulations on getting some of your work onto the main space! The information about the charter schools is great because it is so relevant and current today. This information is a resource for parents of children in the Camden community. The education section is organized well and everything flows into each other. Maybe you could add a picture or logo of the most prominent charter school! I'm having difficulty getting to your sandbox (if you even have anything else in it) so you could either send it to me or I could look over anything you else you might want to add in class. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hmb97 (talk • contribs) 19:36, 14 December 2016 (UTC)
Copyright violations at Camden, New Jersey
editThese edits of the article for Camden, New Jersey, which included extensive word-for-word copying from Public Education in Camden, N.J.: From Inception to Integration have been reverted per WP:COPYVIO policy. All material must be in your own words with proper reliable and verifiable sourcing. Alansohn (talk) 17:33, 20 December 2016 (UTC)
- Happiness47 - please review the Plagiarism and Copyright training module before proceeding further. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:34, 20 December 2016 (UTC)
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Your addition to Camden, New Jersey has been removed, as it appears to have added copyrighted material to Wikipedia without evidence of permission from the copyright holder. If you are the copyright holder, please read Wikipedia:Donating copyrighted materials for more information on uploading your material to Wikipedia. For legal reasons, Wikipedia cannot accept copyrighted material, including text or images from print publications or from other websites, without an appropriate and verifiable license. All such contributions will be deleted. You may use external websites or publications as a source of information, but not as a source of content, such as sentences or images—you must write using your own words. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously and persistent violators will be blocked from editing. Material has been repeatedly copied and pasted in violation of Wikipedia copyright policy. Warnings have been left before and have been ignored. Alansohn (talk) 16:03, 23 December 2016 (UTC)
{{unblock|reason=Your reason here ~~~~}}. Sorry, but this was the third time you added this content. Ian (Wiki Ed)/Guettarda (talk) 20:57, 23 December 2016 (UTC)