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Indeed, the article intentionally consists of sections from the sugar beet page with updates and fixes on the references. The idea is to remove the sections about sugar processing and the history of the sugar beet industry to a separate page called beet sugar factory. (Just like there are separate pages for sugar cane and the cane sugar processing.) As soon as the review is complete, I will replace these sections on the sugar beet page with small paragraphs and a link to the beet sugar factory page, fixing this issue. Grieg2 (talk) 17:00, 19 February 2023 (UTC)Reply

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21 cm RK L/22 calculations

Hello Grieg2,

Thank you for the useful articles on different guns. Useful for me who does not know much about old or new gun machines.


The reason for contacting you is to have some help identifying some old field guns in my town. For example this gun or this one or this one or this one. There are some more which I try to identify and would like your help if you can and know.

Best wishes Nikos D. Karabelas

Actia Nicopolis (talk) 18:01, 27 January 2024 (UTC)Reply

Hi Actia Nicopolis,
The color postcard is a bit vague. On the other three images, the upper part of the carriage, i.e. the vertical part below the trunnions, shows that these all depict a gun on what is roughly the same type of carriage. One can count the number of rivets on the muzzle side. There are 11 in the first column which does not reach the bottom, and 11 in the second column which does not reach to the top. This applies to all three of the carriages.
I identify the carriage as a German 21 cm RK coastal gun carriage. We can deduce this from an image of the 1873 Vienna exhibition, shown on the 21 cm RK L/22 page. The pattern of the rivets of the 21 cm RK L/22 Vienna photograph matches that of your three images. Based on the overall appearance of the guns and carriage, and an image supplied by the Dutch captain Mazel, I say that the three images depict a Krupp 21 cm Ring Kanone.
However, the unclear number of rivets on the Vienna photograph does not seem to match the number of rivets on your three images. The explanation for this would be that as the Dutch captain Mazel mentioned, the 21 cm RK L/22 at the Vienna exhibition was on a carriage which had the trunnions at a height of 2.015 m. This identifies the Vienna carriage as the early c/69 carriage. So, the images you linked are probably on a different coastal carriage. This could be the even somewhat lower c/70 carriage, or the higher c/73 carriage. It anyway explains the likely difference in the number of rivets.
I will first update the carriage identification on the 21 cm RK L/22, and upload or link Mazel's picture of the 21 cm RK L/22 on that carriage, with proper references. I will then proceed with the identification. Grieg2 (talk) 18:17, 30 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
I finished the identification of the gun as a 21 cm RK L/22 by doing some calculations to check whether it all makes sense. These are in the image I added to this discussion. Grieg2 (talk) 11:49, 3 February 2024 (UTC)Reply

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