User talk:Gclay419/sandbox
Latest comment: 10 years ago by Michelev in topic Feedback on 2nd draft
Feedback on 2nd draft
editEliminate quotes; paraphrase or summarize instead.
Major problems with inline citation coding.
Section on future plans needs dates or a timeline. Whenever possible, substitute current data rather than speculation about future information.
Michelev (talk) 22:27, 15 April 2014 (UTC)