User talk:Darkness Shines/pprewrite

@Drmies:, it says Associated Press in San Francisco at the top of the guardian article. Darkness Shines (talk) 14:49, 29 September 2017 (UTC)

• Shoot, I see it now; I thought I had looked everywhere, and I Googled around to look for it elsewhere. Well, change it back if you like. Thanks, Drmies (talk) 14:50, 29 September 2017 (UTC)
• Isn't this weird? Drmies (talk) 14:54, 29 September 2017 (UTC)

Haha, I edit-conflicted with you

OK--the CBS b source says Gibson was "arguing that the event includes black, Latino and transgender speakers"--and this is before the event took place. So not a fact, but the organizer's claim. The Guardian/AP article notes the event did not take place so at best there were black etc. speakers planned; if they were "speakers", they were speakers at the press conference. So neither source confirms "Patriot Prayer rallies have included African Americans, Samoan American's, Latinos and transgender speakers": first of all because the event didn't happen, second because the sources only address one single event. Drmies (talk) 14:51, 29 September 2017 (UTC)

@Drmies: Fixed it, but it looks a bit clumsy. Darkness Shines (talk) 15:00, 29 September 2017 (UTC)

Having looked at it again I've dropped it. Darkness Shines (talk) 15:38, 29 September 2017 (UTC)