Cgooby
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:30, 1 October 2020 (UTC)
COM 482 Introduction
editHi Courtney! My name is Leona and I am a fellow student in COM 482 this quarter. I'm a junior and am majoring in Communication. Looking forward to working with you this quarter! Leonaaklipi (talk) 06:28, 9 October 2020 (UTC)
Welcome!
editGreetings Cgooby and welcome (again!) to both Wikipedia and to COM482! I saw that you picked chocolate bunny. What a funny article and topic! It also looks like you are already making good progress on improving the article.
I would normally urge you to look at excellent on articles on similar topics but I'm really not sure what a similar article in this case would be so I guess I'd just urge you to look at excellent articles in general! I'm looking forward to seeing watching the article develop over the next week. —mako๛ 15:06, 19 October 2020 (UTC)
Peer Review
editHi! I completed the peer review for your article. Here's a link: User:Cgooby/User:Cgooby/Chocolate bunny/Allie partridge Peer Review Best, Allie partridge (talk) 04:29, 24 October 2020 (UTC)
Feedback on your draft
editGreetings Cgooby! I just did a pass on User:Cgooby/Chocolate bunny! The article looks like it's in great shape. I had some quick pieces of feedback:
- I made one tiny stylistic edit. I'd do a final proofing looking for that kind of stuff.
- I don't quite understand the Santa Claus reference. Is that just about the [Easter Bunny]]? If so, maybe it's necessary to add to this article.
- I was curious if you can add some statement as the degree that this is international. It seems like it is. Is it just the English-speaking world? Phrases like drug store (which is a very American English thing to say) got me thinking that. You might want to add "in the United States" or similar to certain claims.
- Given all the awesome new references, you should probably remove the tag on top that says that the article needs references!
Why don't you go ahead, do a final pass to clean up that stuff, and then start moving things over to live version. If you want to make more changes to the article, you just doing it in the live version. Good luck and thanks for your work on the article! —mako๛ 20:03, 4 November 2020 (UTC)
- Thank you for your feedback user:Benjamin Mako Hill It was very helpful for me!
Cgooby (talk) 21:49, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
- @Cgooby: I'm glad! I look forward to seeing your work live in Wikipedia! —mako๛ 19:00, 6 November 2020 (UTC)