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I know, contrybute in wikipedia vietnamese is easily to do , but i know i need learn more english from the smallest things ,like contribute wikipedia to bigger things ,like learn with teacher.I know, my article seems bad, but I will try to make it better. Junurita (talk) 09:50, 11 July 2024 (UTC)

@Junurita I understand that, I really do, but the problem is, and I'm gonna be blunt, your English is not good enough to edit here. There are many other ways to learn English, but editing Wikipedia isn't one of them, as your mistakes end up having to be fixed by others. My suggestion is that, if you really like editing Wikipedia, edit the one in your native language, Vietnamese; or if you insist on editing here, come back when your English is better. Thanks, '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 09:57, 11 July 2024 (UTC)

Ok, im give up ,i actually very useless to do anything here Junurita (talk) 10:13, 11 July 2024 (UTC)

But... Junurita (talk) 10:56, 11 July 2024 (UTC)

Please sir can you Guide me.

Dear Sir Canoni,

Thank you for reviewing my previous draft. Your insights are invaluable.

To enhance it, I plan to focus on clarity, concise language, and stronger references.

I’ll also ensure proper citations and a coherent structure.

Your guidance is much appreciated, and I’m committed to delivering an improved version.

Can you Please guide me sir

Best regards,

Tanish Kshatriya UnKnownrNone (talk) 11:06, 11 July 2024 (UTC)

@UnKnownrNone it seems like you know what the draft lacks, so if you want it to get accepted, add them. If you're looking for help, H:YFA would be a good place to start. Alternatively, you can ask at the Teahouse, Help desk, of the AfC help desk. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 11:17, 11 July 2024 (UTC)

Thanks sir for replying me that much fast and I will be doing what you had told...!! UnKnownrNone (talk) 11:20, 11 July 2024 (UTC)