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Cloud gaming

While i'm not going to revert you and I agree that Gaming on demand was right to be merged, I have issues with how you merged it, by essentially placing all of the content from Gaming on demand into Cloud gaming and erasing everything that was originally in the Cloud gaming article, including all of the references from secondary sources that were used. A number of the references used in the Gaming on demand article were primary sources and are inadequate for referencing the article like it needs to be. Silverseren^C 02:20, 19 November 2011 (UTC)

What I meant was that if you look at the original version of Cloud gaming before the merge, you'll see that there's a lot of information and references that are missing from the current version. If you're up to it, you might want to edit the old version and take some of the references and information and incorporate them into the current version. Also, if you want to improve the current references, try and replace the ones that are primary sources (i.e. sources that are from the company website they're talking about) with secondary sources (i.e. news articles that are discussing the company). And, if you're going to be adding new references, think about maybe using the Template:Cite news and Template:Cite web formats to place them in. Those aren't usually used by new users, so it would give you a head-start on being more advanced around here. :)

I'm kinda busy both in real life and elsewhere on Wikipedia to really work on the Cloud gaming article right now, so it would be really appreciated if you were able to do any of the things I just mentioned.

If you have any questions, feel free to come and ask me on my talk page, I should be available most of the time. If for some reason i'm not available to respond, you can also go ask at the Help Desk. I hope you enjoy your time editing here. Silverseren^C 19:33, 19 November 2011 (UTC)

In response to your feedback

Thank you for your sporadic help, it's appreciated!

Dereckson (talk) 18:09, 10 June 2012 (UTC)

 

A barnstar for you!

	The Copyeditor's Barnstar
	Thank you for your gaming edits! If you wish to find more articles to copyedit, click here to reach randomly one of those. Dereckson (talk) 18:11, 10 June 2012 (UTC)