Brytang
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:48, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
Peer Review
editContent:
- The caption for the first image on your wiki seems to be cut off – I don’t know if that is just on my desktop or not
- For all your other images, add a caption like you have done with this one
- Is it Dhmeier or Dohmeier? You have written both (in the intro and synthesis parts respectively)
- What are the harsh conditions required for AlCl generation – you state this but don’t go into any detail
- Check units for your Raman characterisation – need -1 to be superscript
- When talking about NBOs you make the comparison between the charge transfer values of [Cp*Al]4 and [CpAl]4 – I think you have included an extra * in the formula of the second complex by accident
- What are the impacts of the tetramer having a smaller HOMO-LUMO gap?
- When referring to elements, I would use their full name rather than symbol (Ar, Hg)
- I think you have pluralised the word iminalanes by mistake at one point in the reactivity section
References:
- You have no references right now for me to check but when you are uploading them add a link to the article page
- You must have references to account for all the facts and figures you present
General comments:
- I would try and include chemdraw reaction schemes as images in your wiki rather than just talking about the reactions – this may be easier to understand for readers who don’t have such a strong scientific background (i.e. tetrahedron / heterocubanes)
- You have defined the abbreviations really well
- I think your page could benefit from having links to other pages within it; ones that I would maybe consider adding would be regarding the following words - toluene / diethyl ether / reduction / kelvin / disproportionation / iminoalane / oxidative addition / azide
- Maybe include the main authors name when discussing their work
- Try and include some more characterisation of the compounds mentioned – you talked a lot about the structure of AlCp* itself but what about the compounds it goes onto make?
- When including characterisation information, be sure to be consistent with the number of significant figures you report
Overall the page is really well written but it lacks references – these need to be added ASAP!