Brianmatthewvosburg
Peer Review (Carson Allen) edit
Hello Brian, I enjoyed reading through your article on the Kutai Basin. You provided quality information on the topic, and it was a pleasure reading it. I know you have not fully finished yet, so I will not be too critical. Watch for grammatical errors, as I have seen several. One error is two repeated periods in the first introduction paragraph (4 lines down). Keep things simple. Wikipedia articles can be technical, but make sure you do not overcomplicate things for the readers who do not study geology. Try to add figures and bulletin points to your article as well so you can keep the reader fairly entertained. Your sedimentation section for instance contains too much complicated text. Your article has good information, it just needs to flow better. I recommend that you look at other articles as example on how to edit. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Carsonbanks812 (talk • contribs) 01:31, 23 February 2015 (UTC)
Hi Brianmatthewvosburg! Welcome to Wikipedia. BCarmichael (talk) 22:01, 29 January 2015 (UTC)
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— kikichugirl oh hello! 00:36, 9 March 2015 (UTC)DYK edit
Nice work on the Kutai basin article. I wonder if you would like to consider submitting it as a candidate for the "Did you know...?" feature. DYKs (as they are commonly called) are short snippets taken from Wikipedia's newest articles and, if approved, appear on the Main Page. You can learn more about this by clicking on the image to the right to access a nice pdf outlining the process.
Your article was moved to mainspace on March 9, and since you only have a week to submit the article, you should do this as soon as possible. Assuming, of course, that you're interested. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:49, 11 March 2015 (UTC)