User talk:Ant N York/sandbox
Pre-Edit Peer Review Feedback
Name of student reviewer: User: Cgchapman
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Date of review: 05/10/2013
Name of editor: User: Ant_N_York
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URL of editor’s Userpage: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ant_N_York/sandbox/
Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page: 05/10/2013
Date review submitted to instructor:
Length of edit (too long/too short): Good length
Image (needed/appropriate): Not needed
Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit): Edit information accurate to textbook
Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed: N/A
Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych): Edit information accurate and relevant to I/O Psychology
Wikiformatting: Good Formatting
Grammar & composition: Good grammer
Other comments:None
Cgchapman (talk) 16:01, 10 May 2013 (UTC)
| Name of student reviewer **Replace with username for version on talk page** | Wikipedia User: Keronica Grant |
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| Date of review | 5/8/2013 |
| Name of editor**Replace with username for version on talk page** | Wikipedia User: Ant_N_York |
| URL of editor’s Userpage | http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ant_N_York/sandbox#Personality_Sandbox/Personality |
| Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page | 5/8/2013 |
| Date review submitted to instructor | 5/8/2013 |
| Length of edit (too long/too short) | perfect length |
| Image (needed/appropriate) | |
| Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit) | accurate |
| Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed | Primary |
| Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych) | The article information was relevant to I/O Psych topic |
| Wikiformatting | External link was good |
| Grammar & composition | None |
| Other comments | Good Job
--Keronica Grant (talk) 04:19, 9 May 2013 (UTC) |
| Name of student reviewer **Replace with username for version on talk page | Wikipedia User:Aaleksanian |
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| Date of review | 5/8/2013 |
| Name of editor**Replace with username for version on talk page | Wikipedia User: Ant_N_York |
| URL of editor’s Userpage | http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ant_N_York/sandbox#Personality_Sandbox/Personality |
| Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page | 5/8/2013 |
| Date review submitted to instructor | 5/8/2013 |
| Length of edit (too long/too short) | Enough for edit |
| Image (needed/appropriate) | Image not necessary |
| Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit) | Information provided accurate |
| Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed | N/A |
| Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych) | N/A |
| Wikiformatting | External link was good |
| Grammar & composition | Well done |
| Other comments | Good Job |
| Name of student reviewer **Replace with username for version on talk page** | Wikipedia User:Fernando18 |
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| Date of review | 5/8/2013 |
| Name of editor**Replace with username for version on talk page** | Wikipedia User: Ant_N_York |
| URL of editor’s Userpage | http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ant_N_York/sandbox#Personality_Sandbox/Personality |
| Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page | 5/8/2013 |
| Date review submitted to instructor | 5/8/2013 |
| Length of edit (too long/too short) | Neither perfect length |
| Image (needed/appropriate) | Good image showed great details. |
| Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit) | Very accurate |
| Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed | Primary |
| Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych) | The article information was relevant to I/O Psych topic |
| Wikiformatting | External link was good |
| Grammar & composition | None |
| Other comments | Good Job |
| Name of student reviewer **Replace with username for version on talk page | Wikipedia User:Aaleksanian |
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| Date of review | 5/8/2013 |
| Name of editor**Replace with username for version on talk page | Wikipedia User: Ant_N_York |
| URL of editor’s Userpage | http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ant_N_York/sandbox#Personality_Sandbox/Personality |
| Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page | 5/8/2013 |
| Date review submitted to instructor | 5/8/2013 |
| Length of edit (too long/too short) | Enough for edit |
| Image (needed/appropriate) | Image not necessary |
| Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit) | Information provided accurate |
| Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed | N/A |
| Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych) | N/A |
| Wikiformatting | External link was good |
| Grammar & composition | Well done |
| Other comments | Good Job |
Pre-Edit Peer Review Feedback
Name of student reviewer: Hmehta0120
Date of review: 5/8/2013
Name of editor: Ant_N_York
URL of editor’s Userpage: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ant_N_York/sandbox#Personality_Sandbox/Personality
Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page: 5/8/2013
Date review submitted to instructor: 5/8/2013 Length of edit: I find your length well. Provide the information in a simple and great manner.
Image (needed/appropriate): N/A- I would recommend you add an image because there are many wiki editors of that page that have added images. So if possible I would saw add an image.
Review of textbook information: Very accurate to the textbook, and liked how you cited the textbook.
Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed:N/A
Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych):N/A
Wikiformatting: reat wiki formation. Paragraph form and like the way you bought in external links throughout the format.
Grammar & composition: Found no errors, looks good to me.
Other comments: Great edit, like the formatting of it. And if you add an image would help you get more creativity points. Great Job! Good Luck
Hmehta0120 (talk) 21:39, 8 May 2013 (UTC)
| Name of student reviewer **Replace with username for version on talk page** | Wikipedia User:Trinirebel (talk) 02:27, 9 May 2013 (UTC) |
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| Date of review | 5/8/2013 |
| Name of editor**Replace with username for version on talk page** | Wikipedia User: Ant_N_York |
| URL of editor’s Userpage | http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ant_N_York/sandbox#Personality_Sandbox/Personality |
| Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page | 5/8/2013 |
| Date review submitted to instructor | 5/8/2013 |
| Length of edit (too long/too short) | Appropriate lenght |
| Image (needed/appropriate) | None required for this edit |
| Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit) | Very accurate |
| Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed | N/A |
| Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych) | The article information was relevant to I/O Psych topic |
| Wikiformatting | External link was good |
| Grammar & composition | Perfect |
| Other comments | exemplary edit |
Trinirebel (talk) 02:27, 9 May 2013 (UTC)
| Name of student reviewer **Replace with username for version on talk page | Aisha Hamid | ||
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| Date of review | 5/9/2013 | ||
| Name of editor**Replace with username for version on talk page | Wikipedia User: Ant_N_York | ||
| URL of editor’s Userpage | http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ant_N_York/sandbox#Personality_Sandbox/Personality | ||
| Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page | 5/9/2013 | ||
| Date review submitted to instructor | 5/9/2013 | ||
| Length of edit (too long/too short) | Perfect | ||
| Image (needed/appropriate) | N/A- but I recommend you add an image will give you extra bonus points, and will complete the wiki page. | ||
| Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit) | Accurate | ||
| Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed | N/A | ||
| Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych) | N/A | ||
| Wikiformatting | Great Formatting especially using the worlds are external links | Grammar & composition | Information is very well put together. |
| Other comments | Over all great edit. Like the formatting a lot! |
Aisha Hamid (talk) 17:49, 9 May 2013 (UTC)