Appealing Topics After looking through a few articles, some topics that appeal to me would be cyberbullying, writing spaces and internet phenomena, and possibly online magazines. I am very interested in the topic of cyberbullying as I was a part of a club in high school for it. I think it would be interesting to make improvements on an article for Wikipedia. I also would like to add onto the subject of writing spaces because we have been already brainstorming in class some ideas about that. Also, I am not very familiar with online magazines but after reading an article I think it could fascinating to improve an article of the topic.

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Choosing a topic: After looking further into these topics I have concluded which ones are most interesting to me in order from most interesting to least interesting.

1. Cyberbullying: This will always be my first choice for a topic to do further research on because I have a strong belief that cyberbullying is not right and needs to be stopped. It's always interesting to read about what type of cyberbullying is going on and if it is getting worse or better. And if it is getting worse, I would like to do what I can to make sure it get better from there.

2. Discourse Communities: Discourse communities I was not first interested in but reading more into it I have changed my mind. I think it would be interesting to study about specific communities, especially ones of my interest.

3. Online Magazines: I am a fan of magazines and I like to read them when I can, especially Rolling Stone. Launching the magazine on the online I think is an awesome idea and could be very handy for people on the go. I honestly do like actual tangible magazines better though which is why this is my third choice. I think the idea of and actual paperback magazine is cooler than a technological version.

4. Remediation: After looking into this topic a little bit more I have become more into what it is about. I think, scientifically, this would be an awesome topic to study definitely and to find further research on the topic could be fun.

Sources to add to cyberbullying edit

http://cyberbullying.org/stories/ - personal stories related to cyberbullying.


http://www.ryanpatrickhalligan.org/ - Ryan's story on cyberbullying.

Group Talk edit

Hey, this is Billy.

I looked up the resources and there were some stuffs need to be changed.

36. Log in required. http://www.acs-teens.org/cyberbulling-what-parents-need-to-know/ this site has same information but can access with out logging in.

41 & 42. I couldn’t find the anything about cyberstalking in this site.

43. Webpage is not available

45. It directs me to Yahoo.com. Need to delete it from the list.

46. webpage is not available anymore. Can find the same information on https://docs.education.gov.au/system/files/doc/other/australian_covert_bullying_prevalence_study_chapter_1.pdf

48. The book is not showing up. Use this: http://eprints.lse.ac.uk/24368/1/D3.2_Report-Cross_national_comparisons-2nd-edition.pdf

50. found an actual site. http://ir.lib.hiroshima-u.ac.jp/files/public/36769/20150320115026619167/JEducSci_8_113.pdf

61. Page is not founded. http://www.e-gracenotes.org/article/1698/archives/family-first/cyber-bully

63. Page is not founded.

64. Page is not founded. https://books.google.com/books?id=qqwHcNLVDwUC&pg=PA65&lpg=PA65&dq=According+to+a+2005+survey+by+the+National+Children%27s+Home+charity+and+Tesco+Mobile&source=bl&ots=StsamdZdvu&sig=6ALeEJWW-xdJFCLg9v_w6XyUWZI&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0CB0Q6AEwAGoVChMIgpCntMrWyAIVQu9jCh0l9Q8M#v=onepage&q=According%20to%20a%202005%20survey%20by%20the%20National%20Children's%20Home%20charity%20and%20Tesco%20Mobile&f=false — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dkim35 (talkcontribs) 17:26, 22 October 2015 (UTC)Reply

2015 Cyberbullying Data

http://cyberbullying.org/2015-data/ — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dkim35 (talkcontribs) 00:16, 23 October 2015 (UTC)Reply

Data that shows cyberbullying is decreasing

http://www.usnews.com/news/blogs/data-mine/2015/05/15/school-bullying-cyber-bullying-continue-to-drop — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dkim35 (talkcontribs) 00:18, 23 October 2015 (UTC)Reply

Cyberbullying in South Korea

http://blogs.wsj.com/korearealtime/2014/11/03/one-in-four-korean-students-hit-by-cyberbullying-poll-shows/

Dkim35 (talk) 00:58, 23 October 2015 (UTC)Reply



This is Amy Here are the results for references 1-35 on the page

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south Korea and cyberbullying : http://time.com/41285/south-korea-kids-cyberbullying-alerts/


http://articles.latimes.com/2010/jan/01/world/la-fg-korea-cyberthugs2-2010jan02


Netherlands cyberbullying http://www.huffingtonpost.ca/2014/04/17/amanda-todd-arrest-netherlands_n_5168784.html


file:///Users/AmyFiene/Downloads/societies-05-00043.pdf

Formal Questions:

South Korea is one of the world leader in Internet connectivity with the world fastest average internet connection speed. 92.4% of the population are internet users. We should definitely add cyberbullying in South Korea into research section. Is anyone currently working on South Korea? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dkim35 (talkcontribs) 14:25, 23 October 2015 (UTC) dReply

The references shown below are either not existing or wrong. We found alternative links which corresponds to the same contents. Can you confirm if these are accurate enough for the wikipedia page?


This is Erwin

Here are the results for references 70-103


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Cyberbullying and Bullying Statistics for 2014 http://nobullying.com/cyberbullying-bullying-statistics-2014-finally/ — Preceding unsigned comment added by Erwcastro1 (talkcontribs) 19:20, 27 October 2015 (UTC)Reply

November 2015 edit

  Hello, I'm Oshwah. I noticed that you recently removed some content from Talk:Cyberbullying  with this edit, without explaining why. In the future, it would be helpful to others if you described your changes to Wikipedia with an edit summary. If this was a mistake, don't worry, the removed content has been restored. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thanks. ~Oshwah~ (talk) (contribs) 05:56, 19 November 2015 (UTC)Reply