User talk:Aliwall/sandbox
Peer Review
editThis is a great start to the article.
Pros:
You provide a lot of neutral information and cite your sources appropriately. From what I have read there is little to no bias on this article.
You have a strong mix of sources from several different websites.
As of right now, the page seems to be free of spelling and grammar mistakes.
Although concise, the page provides a lot of information about the brewery as well as the owners.
Great job embedding links into your article.
What to work on:
The addition of pictures would help make your article even stronger. Pictures are very important to visual individuals and helps make your page look even more professional.
Think about adding different sections to your article. There seems to be one main section. Ex: History, About the Owners, etc.
What other information can you add? Any specifics about the drinks?