Aabdulla6
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editHello, Aabdulla6, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 13:33, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
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editHi! I'm concerned that this is a little too much like an essay in places, as there are things that come across like a reflection on the topic area. For example, stating that digital platforms are the most convenient method is a personal statement and one that will be highly subjective to the reader. While it's likely that the average reader might agree because they're using a digital encyclopedia, it's also possible that they would disagree and say that it's easier to go through an office and/or living person. This raises questions about original research, essentially whether or not you're summarizing the material or creating your own conclusions based on source material. When writing for Wikipedia you need to avoid original research and only summarize.
That said, the sourcing here is good and I think that you have a good base here - the writing just needs to be re-tooled to fit Wikipedia's style guidelines. A good guide would be to look at the existing article on fintech or at articles like the Global financial system, especially as the latter is deemed a Good Article and is one of the best on Wikipedia. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:46, 4 December 2018 (UTC)