User talk:AKAnthony/sandbox
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Jagrif02 in topic Feedback on First Draft of Contribution
Feedback on First Draft of Contribution
editNicely done.
These thoughts are in no particular order:
- Check out the Manual of Style for guidance on how to treat tiitles
- Also remember that Wikipedia doesn't capitalize every word of headings - again - see the MOS
- Check punctuation carefully for correct use of commas and complete clause punctuation
- A possibility for expansion might be the research that indicates a woman's display of masculine traits is often criticized as being too macho or in some other way inappropriate. It makes an interesting and intriguing contrast with the research you've cited indicating that masculine traits and communication styles are essential to advancement.Jagrif02 (talk) 12:46, 18 October 2016 (UTC)