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BSG: "Sorry but I don't see how the past edits in between my last made the first plot any clearer, if not actually more unclear. What is the justification in "just" rewriting, and blurring the information?"

Wikipedia is a collaborative effort. IMO the (now) current synopsis for Storyline One is quite awkward to read. Its a first draft so that's to be expected. I took what you had drafted and use it in creating a second draft. I would have thought the respectful thing to do would have been to take my draft and then further refine it, perhaps reversing various parts you disagreed with.

Terms like:

seems very depressed which she perceives as like having a purpose according to her words presumably her own

Read very awkwardly and are IMO overly cautious in qualifying everything (in a tacked on way at the end of each sentence). If you read my version again you'll note that I've tried to keep the content of everything you've said but alter the emphasis and flow. I'm not saying its perfect but IMO its better than the current draft. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 61.29.115.146 (talk • contribs)

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