14misiu21
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editGreat additions! In the "Boats" section there's this sentence: "Blunt force trauma is from the hull of the boat hitting the turtle, results in a cracking and less obvious injury on the turtle's carapace" which I would consider rewording. Maybe also offer a brief explanation of what the "carapace" is (unless it's somewhere else in the article) the first time you use it. Consider rewording: "Also, the faster a boat is travelling the more damage is done to the turtle, making incidents more lethal" as well! Is there a picture of a sea turtle with similar injuries? The manatee picture is a little misleading but I understand if that's all you can find. I really liked the addition of a stable isotope section! Very informative. Besides some typos and some grammar stuff, you've done awesome work! I can't wait to visit the completed page. CLMills (talk) 18:23, 30 November 2018 (UTC)
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:43, 23 October 2018 (UTC)