Template talk:Did you know nominations/Jane Severance

lesbian > such on second mention

@Bobamnertiopsis, I've changed this hook slightly to use 'such characters' in the second mention of lesbian characters, FYI. Valereee (talk) 20:56, 20 March 2023 (UTC)

Hook modifications

• ... that all three of Jane Severance's books for young readers include lesbian characters, including her first book, the first picture book to include lesbian characters? [2023-03-20 at 20:41:55, by Valereee]
• ... that all three of Jane Severance's books for young readers include lesbian characters, including her first book, the first picture book to include such characters? [2023-03-20 at 20:55:51, by Valereee]

GalliumBot (talk • contribs) (he/it) 21:25, 20 March 2023 (UTC)

Hook modifications

• ... that all three of Jane Severance's books for young readers include lesbian characters, including her first book, the first picture book to include such characters? [2023-03-21 at 16:24:33, by Ravenpuff]
• ... that all three of Jane Severance's books for young readers include lesbian characters, including her first book, which was the first picture book to include such characters? [2023-03-21 at 16:27:53, by Ravenpuff]

GalliumBot (talk • contribs) (he/it) 17:25, 21 March 2023 (UTC)