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Was willst du dich betrüben

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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk)

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... that although poet and minister Johann Heermann (pictured) was distressed by the Thirty Years' War, he wrote the hymn Was willst du dich betrüben (Why do you want to distress yourself)?

Comment: translation of title desirable, hopefully not too long

Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self nom at 15:03, 3 August 2011 (UTC)Reply

reviewed: Highland Cottage

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Length, format, content rules: - it's fine with the title translated (and the translation should be included)
Source: The hook is slightly ORish (or SYNTHish) as the source does not make a specific connection between the work and the 30 years war. Still, I think, this isn't a serious concern here, it is not actually unrepresentative in any way, and the phrasing is quite witty. Let's go with it.
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