- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 23:31, 21 September 2012 (UTC)
Yertsevo edit
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that the accounts of life in the Gulag labor camp, written by Gustaw Herling-Grudziński (pictured in an NKVD prison mug-shot), preceded Solzhenitsyn's revelations by more than a decade?
Created/expanded by Poeticbent (talk). Self nom at 19:21, 30 August 2012 (UTC)
Length and hook are fine. No copyvio. But the hook's reference is based on some reviewer on Amazon, not a typical reliable source. The reviewer may well be correct but we'll need a better source if the hook is to be retained. Or you can propose a new, better sourced hook.Hybernator (talk) 19:07, 16 September 2012 (UTC)
- Thank you for your review, Hybernator. Much appreciated. I added a couple more inline citations, including from A World Apart book review by Anne Applebaum and from the Note by Penguin Group on the book jacket. Poeticbent talk 16:14, 17 September 2012 (UTC)
- Applebaum's web page says "10 years" (not "more than a decade") so we should change the text to reflect that.
- How about (ALT1): "...
that the accounts of life in the Yertsevo gulag, written by Gustaw Herling-Grudziński (pictured in an NKVD prison mug-shot), preceded Solzhenitsyn's revelations by a decade?" Hybernator (talk) 23:37, 17 September 2012 (UTC)
- How about (ALT1): "...
- I see your point about the exact reference to Yertsevo in the hook as oppose to the Gulag system as a whole. The only problem I see with your ALT is that the Solzhenitsyn's revelations did not relate to Yertsevo specifically but the entire system of camps, and even Grudziński was a prisoner of at least two of them and did not limit his book to his experiences there. Poeticbent talk 01:03, 18 September 2012 (UTC)
- I see. On the other hand, the nominated article is about a specific gulag. But you want to compare Herling-Grudziński's revelations in A World Apart with those of Solzhenitsyn a decade later. What about this?
- ALT2: "...
that the accounts of life in the Yertsevo gulag, described in the book A World Apart by Herling-Grudziński (pictured), preceded Solzhenitsyn's revelations by a decade?" - I've removed NKVD and mugshot to keep the word count low. Hybernator (talk) 02:15, 18 September 2012 (UTC)
- We are almost there. Please see my ALT3 (below) for the combined hook from all of the above.
- ALT3: "...
that the account of life in the Yertsevo labor camp, described in the book A World Apart by Herling-Grudziński (pictured), preceded Solzhenitsyn's revelations about GULAG by a decade?" Poeticbent talk 16:31, 19 September 2012 (UTC)
- ALT4: "... that the account of life in the Yertsevo labor camp, described in the book A World Apart by Herling-Grudziński (pictured), preceded Solzhenitsyn's revelations about gulags by a decade?" Hybernator (talk) 00:15, 21 September 2012 (UTC)
- Sounds perfect, thanks. I crossed out the other three ALTs to avoid confusion. Looking forward to a final tick. Thanks again Hybernator. Poeticbent talk 08:56, 21 September 2012 (UTC)
good to go for ALT4. Hybernator (talk) 17:30, 21 September 2012 (UTC)
- Sounds perfect, thanks. I crossed out the other three ALTs to avoid confusion. Looking forward to a final tick. Thanks again Hybernator. Poeticbent talk 08:56, 21 September 2012 (UTC)
