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The result was: promoted by Yazan (talk) 12:02, 25 September 2012 (UTC)

Live While We're Young edit

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  • ... that "Live While We're Young" by One Direction made available for pre-orders on 24 August 2012, became the fastest selling pre-order single ever, topping the advance sales charts in 40 countries?

Created/expanded by AdabowtheSecond (talk). Nominated by TheSpecialUser (talk) at 02:19, 26 August 2012 (UTC)

  • Everything seems OK on first glance. New entry created as redirect on 23 August 2012, and filled in on 25 August 2012, with snippets from British radio and MTV websites. The hook however, is a straight-up infomercial repeated word-for-word from both sources, (the third one already inaccessible). However, if you read carefuly what they say at Capital FM, you'll notice the magic words "it's been announced" meaning, the claim of "the fastest selling pre-order single in history" is yet to be confirmed by third party reliable sources. Poeticbent talk 19:18, 30 August 2012 (UTC)
Isn't MTV considered a third party reliable source, I just added CF for extra. AdabowtheSecond (talk) 01:32, 1 September 2012 (UTC)
"One Direction have scored the fastest-selling pre-order single in history with their forthcoming EP Live While We're Young. The fivesome have gone to the top of the pre-order charts in more than 40 countries, including the UK, New Zealand, Australia, Italy, Spain, France, Singapore, Brazil and Mexico - despite the EP only going on sale last night." ---MTV UK, exactly states what is in present article, I don't understand what more is needed. AdabowtheSecond (talk) 01:56, 17 September 2012 (UTC)
  • I asked for the source of charts, but not for another infomercial. Please note that a PR company (HJPR) announcing these claims on behalf of their client (for the British pop radio) is not a reliable source. Read what the Guardian said in section One Direction Biography about the earlier What Makes You Beautiful. "It was the fastest selling single of the year 2011" in the UK — but nothing about Live While We're Young as "the fastest-selling pre-order single in history" in there.[1] Sometimes more time is needed to verify claims like that, that's all. Poeticbent talk 19:05, 22 September 2012 (UTC)
  • Not a fan of OD at all. However, what about ALT2?
  • ALT2 - ... that the official video for "Live While We're Young" was initially set to premier on 24 September, but was later premiered on 20 September 2012 following a leak of it online? — Preceeding unsigned comment added by TheSpecialUser (talk · contribs)
  • ALT2 has couple of typos and a little redundancy. May I suggest ALT3 instead, which has slightly different wording but the same facts? (And a much shorter ALT3a, with ALT3b adding One Direction back in from the original hook?) —BlueMoonset (talk) 03:26, 23 September 2012 (UTC)
  • ALT3: ... that the official video for "Live While We're Young" was initially set to be released on 24 September 2012, but was premiered four days early following a leak of it online?
  • ALT3a: ... that the official video for "Live While We're Young" was premiered four days early following a leak of it online?
  • ALT3b: ... that the official video for One Direction's "Live While We're Young" was premiered four days early following a leak of it online?
I think, 3b is the best one, because its best that the reader identifies whose song it is, rather than just a random title. AdabowtheSecond (talk) 03:45, 23 September 2012 (UTC)
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