Template:Did you know nominations/Wolfgang Marschner

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 10:34, 4 January 2021 (UTC)

Wolfgang Marschner

Created by LouisAlain (talk) and Gerda Arendt (talk). Nominated by Gerda Arendt (talk) at 23:41, 25 December 2020 (UTC).

  • DYK criteria met as to length and creation date. No copyvios detected. Much of the article is translated from the German Wikipedia article, which has been properly attributed on the article's talk page. The hook is reliably sourced. Ready for promotion.  JGHowes  talk 15:03, 29 December 2020 (UTC)
  • One paragraph under Performing career lacks a cite, per Rule D2. Yoninah (talk) 21:15, 3 January 2021 (UTC)
  • I also suggest rewording the hook as follows:
  • ALT0a: ... that Wolfgang Marschner was the violinist in the first public performance of the Sonatine by Karlheinz Stockhausen, with the composer as the pianist? Yoninah (talk) 21:17, 3 January 2021 (UTC)
    I'll look at the refs tomorrow - too tired. I think that the first performance ever of a work by Stockhausen is much "hookier" than just first of Sonatine. It's in memory of Jerome Kohl, who seems to have known everything on Stockhausen. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:35, 3 January 2021 (UTC)
  • No problem. ALT0 is fine; I just added a link. Restoring tick per JGHowes's review. Yoninah (talk) 22:38, 3 January 2021 (UTC)