- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:25, 10 June 2017 (UTC)
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Wolf W. Zuelzer edit
... that Wolf W. Zuelzer, who demonstrated that childhood leukemias could be cured, died from the disease in old age?Source: "His seminal paper in 1964 on long-term survival of children with acute leukemia was the first clear statement of the curability of childhood leukemia by early combined chemotherapy", "died of leukemia")
- Reviewed: White-barred piculet (3 of 5)
- Comment: Please suggest any improvements on the wording.
Created by 97198 (talk). Self-nominated at 07:48, 22 May 2017 (UTC).
Interesting life on few but good sources, no copyvio obvious. The hook is interesting! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 18:34, 30 May 2017 (UTC)
@97198: Well, he didn't die from childhood leukemia, as the hook suggests. Do you mean:- ALT1:
... that Wolf W. Zuelzer, who demonstrated that leukemias in children could be cured, died from the disease in old age?Yoninah (talk) 17:03, 4 June 2017 (UTC)
- @Yoninah: Well "childhood leukemia" isn't a disease, but if you think people might read it that way, then sure. 97198 (talk) 07:48, 5 June 2017 (UTC)
- I'm not a medical expert: do we say leukemia in children, - heart disease in children?
- *ALT2: ... that Wolf W. Zuelzer, who demonstrated that children could be cured of leukemia, died from the disease in old age? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:19, 5 June 2017 (UTC)
@97198:, yes, childhood leukemia is a disease. But I like Gerda's ALT2 solution. ALT2 hook refs verified and cited inline. Rest of review per Gerda Arendt. ALT2 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 13:09, 5 June 2017 (UTC)
