Template:Did you know nominations/Walter Eugene Clark

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 20:35, 2 November 2013 (UTC)

Walter Eugene Clark edit

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... that Walter Eugene Clark translated the Aryabhatiya of Aryabhata with critical notes in 1930?

Reviewed: Grace Bates

Created by Solomon7968 (talk). Self nominated at 02:24, 18 October 2013 (UTC).

Long enough, no copyvio. Hook info is cited in article. No bare URLs. Well-referenced. Perhaps, "that Walter Eugene Clark translation of the Aryabhatiya of Aryabhata with critical notes was published in 1930?" avoids a possible ambiguity with regard to the "critical notes"? Only my third review, so a second opinion might be helpful! Edwardx (talk) 23:09, 1 November 2013 (UTC)

@Edwardx Maybe I am missing the semantics details but the ALT1 and my hook looks same to me. Solomon 7968 19:02, 2 November 2013 (UTC)

Agreed! I think the point I was trying to make was that one could read ALT1 as Clark having also translated the "critical notes". But, that seems a rather unlikely reading to make, and there seems no elegant solution. So, all looks fine to me. Edwardx (talk) 19:15, 2 November 2013 (UTC)