Template:Did you know nominations/Trout Creek (Monument Creek)
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The result was: promoted by PanydThe muffin is not subtle 17:20, 19 April 2015 (UTC)
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Trout Creek (Monument Creek) edit
- ... that the surficial geology in the vicinity of Trout Creek includes bedrock, Wisconsinan Till, alluvium, fill, wetlands, and lakes?
Moved to mainspace by Jakec (talk). Self nominated at 02:04, 1 April 2015 (UTC).
solid information on good sources, not too exciting, nor is the hook. What do you think of saying something about the wild trout in the Trout creek? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 23:24, 16 April 2015 (UTC)
- @Gerda Arendt: You mean something like ... that there are trout in Trout Creek? In terms of reader interest, it could either be a good hook (as in, hmm...there must be something I'm missing) or a terrible one (as in, well, obviously). ALT0 is probably somewhere in between, in my opinion. There's a lot of stuff in it, and some of it might sound enticingly curious to the layperson. --Jakob (talk) aka Jakec 23:39, 16 April 2015 (UTC)
- I rather thought of the article line
- ALT1: ... that wild trout naturally reproduce in Trout Creek from its headwaters to its mouth?
- but I can't approve my own hook even if it's yours. So I
approve the original and predict not too many clicks, but you taught something to the few attracted ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:16, 17 April 2015 (UTC)
