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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 17:30, 19 May 2020 (UTC)

Treaty of Lutatius

  • ... that a draft condition of the Treaty of Lutatius that Carthage pay Rome 57,000 kg of silver was rejected as insufficient? Source: Lazenby, John (1996). The First Punic War: A Military History. Stanford, California: Stanford University Press. ISBN 978-0-8047-2673-3 p. 158.

Improved to Good Article status by Gog the Mild (talk). Self-nominated at 19:10, 22 April 2020 (UTC).

  • @Gog the Mild: Hi, I have reviewed this nomination. Everything looks good, except for one issue. epicgenius (talk) 13:39, 25 April 2020 (UTC)
General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited: No - The reference must immediately follow the end of the sentence where the hook is mentioned, per WP:DYK#Cited hook.
  • Interesting: Yes
  • Other problems: No - The conversion to pounds is not mentioned in the article.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: epicgenius (talk) 13:39, 25 April 2020 (UTC)

Thanks epicgenius. Fair point, I have removed it from the hook. And repeated the relevant cites at the end of what I think are the two relevant sentences in the article. Gog the Mild (talk) 13:50, 25 April 2020 (UTC)