- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 11:53, 19 February 2018 (UTC)
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Tomori Kusunoki edit
... that Japanese voice actress Tomori Kusunoki originally auditioned as a singer?Source: [1] "以前、声優志望の人が集まった大会みたいなものに出たことがあって。そこで優勝した人はあるＣＭの音声を担当できるって大会でした。でも、かなり最初のほうで普通に落ちちゃって。それで演技は経験者じゃないと難しいんだなって挫折したんです。ただ、アニメに関わる仕事はしたかったし、私は音楽も好きだったので、アニソンの歌手になれたらいいなとは思っていて。それで歌手志望でオーディションを受けました。"- ALT1:... that because she felt that she lacked experience, Japanese voice actress Tomori Kusunoki auditioned as a singer? Source: same as ALT0
- ALT2:
... that Japanese voice actress Tomori Kusunoki was her junior high school's student council president?Source: [2] "これはあまり言ってないんですけど、中学生の時に生徒会長をやっていて。"
- Reviewed: Từ hôm nay (Feel Like Ooh)
Created by Narutolovehinata5 (talk). Self-nominated at 03:02, 10 February 2018 (UTC).
@Narutolovehinata5: these hooks seem very lightweight, like tidbits from a fan magazine. Yoninah (talk) 01:31, 12 February 2018 (UTC)
- @Yoninah: Well, those came out of an interview with her. I can help rephrase one or more of the hooks if you wish (the point I was trying to make with ALT0 and ALT1 is that although her goal was to become a voice actress, she decided to audition as a singer in that audition held by the agency. So the position she auditioned for was different from her goal). I'm a bit busy right now, but I'm willing to suggest additional hooks, as long as I could find them in the sources. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 01:34, 12 February 2018 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: I think it's just a matter of how you word the hooks. ALT0 and ALT1 aren't bad (ALT2 is), but because you're only identifying her as a performer, whatever you say about her comes across as magazine-y. Yoninah (talk) 01:43, 12 February 2018 (UTC)
- @Yoninah: Thanks. I'm not exactly sure how to reword the hooks though, as in explaining the point that she is a voice actress but she originally auditioned as a singer. Or what about a different hook instead? How about:
- ALT3: that Tomori Kusunoki decided to become a voice actress after hearing Kana Hanazawa's
voice actingperformance in the anime series Kobato?
- ALT3: that Tomori Kusunoki decided to become a voice actress after hearing Kana Hanazawa's
- Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 01:58, 12 February 2018 (UTC)
Thanks for the alts. Either ALT1 or ALT3 are fine; I removed the repetition from ALT3. Here is a full review: New enough, long enough, neutrally written, adequately referenced. No close paraphrasing in English-language sources. Foreign-language ALT1 and ALT3 hook refs AGF and cited inline. QPQ done. Good to go. Yoninah (talk) 11:33, 13 February 2018 (UTC)
