Template:Did you know nominations/Tommy (album)

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The result was: promoted by Carabinieri (talk) 14:14, 8 October 2014 (UTC)

Tommy (album) edit

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... ~~that Tommy has sold over 20 million copies?~~

ALT1:... that The Who album Tommy has sold over 20 million copies since its release in 1969?
Reviewed: Not a self-nomination

Improved to Good Article status by Ritchie333 (talk). Nominated by Oceanh (talk) at 23:03, 20 September 2014 (UTC).

GA listed on Sept 18, hook is short and directly referenced. Just a minor complaint: Both of the references put the sale of this album at 20 million, not "more than". --Pgallert (talk) 18:56, 5 October 2014 (UTC)

Thank you for the review. What about the modifications suggested below, Oceanh (talk) 19:43, 5 October 2014 (UTC)

ALT0A ... that Tommy has sold in the order of 20 million copies?
ALT1A:... that the Who album Tommy has sold in the order of 20 million copies since its release in 1969?
ALT0B ... that Tommy has sold 20 million copies?
ALT1B:... that the Who album Tommy has sold 20 million copies since its release in 1969?
- Sorry, I forgot to watch this No real preference for which of the ALTs, they are all equally acceptable. Original hook and ALT1 struck for clarity. --Pgallert (talk) 06:56, 8 October 2014 (UTC)