Template:Did you know nominations/Tim Robards

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 03:43, 22 November 2018 (UTC)

Tim Robards edit

  • Reviewed: I.O.U. Haifan Lin
  • Comment: Please feel free to tweak the hook, or suggest another.

Moved to mainspace by JuneGloom07 (talk). Self-nominated at 17:57, 20 October 2018 (UTC).

The article is long enough and new enough. The article appears well written with no obvious copyright violations, and the sources appear legitimate. The hooks are good, though the flow of the second hook might be improved by changing the word "became" to "were" due to the slight difference in implied importance of timing of the event. --User:SonOfPatter (talk)

  • Added QPQ, changed wording in the ALT1 hook per review. - JuneGloom07 Talk 00:10, 23 October 2018 (UTC)