- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Montanabw(talk) 22:42, 9 March 2016 (UTC)
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Thelma C. Swain edit
- ... that Thelma C. Swain endowed a scholarship at each of the seven colleges of the Maine Community College System?
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... that during her lifetime, Thelma C. Swain donated $2 million to the Maine Community College System, and her estate bequeathed an additional $1 million? - Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Xu You (Southern Tang)
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Created by Yoninah (talk). Self-nominated at 01:02, 23 February 2016 (UTC).
This article is long enough and new enough. The article is neutral and contains no close paraphrasing as far as I can see. Approving the original hook which has an inline citation to a reliable source. If you wanted to use ALT1, I would advocate adding "to the Foundation for Maine's Community Colleges" to the end of the hook. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:58, 27 February 2016 (UTC)
- @Cwmhiraeth: thanks for the review. I originally wrote it that way, but it sounded too clunky. I'm happy to strike ALT1 and go with ALT0. Yoninah (talk) 18:38, 27 February 2016 (UTC)
- Going with the original hook is fine. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:41, 27 February 2016 (UTC)
