Template:Did you know nominations/Shukri al-Asali

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 11:51, 21 December 2018 (UTC)

Shukri al-Asali edit

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Portrait of Shukri al-Asali prior to his execution in 1916

... that Ottoman parliament member Shukri al-Asali (pictured) galvanized Syrian-Arab opposition to the empire’s Turkish-centric policies and was later executed by the government in 1916?

Reviewed: Eugene de Mirecourt

Created by George Al-Shami (talk) and Al Ameer son (talk). Nominated by Al Ameer son (talk) at 19:38, 21 November 2018 (UTC).

- Al Ameer son, any update on a QPQ? Best, Mifter (talk) 00:24, 10 December 2018 (UTC)

~~@Mifter: Seems like the nominator hasn't bothered to reply anything... Regards, Vincent^LUFan (talk) (Kenton!) 06:04, 13 December 2018 (UTC)~~

Sorry, slipped my mind. Will get to this today. —Al Ameer (talk) 15:35, 13 December 2018 (UTC)

@Mifter: QPQ done. —Al Ameer (talk) 04:53, 14 December 2018 (UTC)

Reviewer needed now that QPQ has been provided. BlueMoonset (talk) 23:05, 17 December 2018 (UTC)

@Al Ameer son: The Member of Parliament section is quite concerning. It reads quite biasedly. Could you rephrase the sentences? Otherwise, there are no issues (AGF for reliable sources) Vincent^LUFan (talk) (Kenton!) 04:55, 18 December 2018 (UTC)

@Vincent60030: Thanks for the review. I looked the section over. Is there anything in particular that’s concerning or needs rephrasing? —Al Ameer (talk) 05:05, 18 December 2018 (UTC)

@Al Ameer son: The second paragraph especially. Vincent^LUFan (talk) (Kenton!) 05:20, 18 December 2018 (UTC)

@Vincent60030: Thanks, I’ll work on that passage tomorrow and update you here. Let me know if there’s anything else. Cheers, —Al Ameer (talk) 05:28, 18 December 2018 (UTC)
@Vincent60030: I’ve made some adjustments to the language in the 2nd passage. All views are attributed to their holders, i.e. al-Asali, Shahbandar and the Turkish press, etc. Let me know if further adjustments are needed. —Al Ameer (talk) 02:23, 19 December 2018 (UTC)

Alright, I think everything is good to go now. Wouldn’t expect much since I’ve seen some effort put in here. Offline sources gonna assume they’re verifiable. :) Vincent^LUFan (talk) (Kenton!) 08:31, 19 December 2018 (UTC)