Template:Did you know nominations/Shooting of David McAtee

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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 02:58, 22 July 2020 (UTC)

Shooting of David McAtee

Created by Fram (talk) and Leaky.Solar (talk). Nominated by The Squirrel Conspiracy (talk) at 22:34, 2 June 2020 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: This is an informative article and the hook is good. Piped link is better pointing to Police body camera. Please add the weblink to the citation here and on the article put it on the previous sentence to reference the claim directly. Then it's good to go. Mujinga (talk) 17:51, 2 July 2020 (UTC)

I've changed the destination for the piped link. Fram, can you handle the sourcing request from Mujinga? The Squirrel Conspiracy (talk) 17:57, 2 July 2020 (UTC)
Hello BlueMoonset, The Squirrel Conspiracy, and Mujinga - DYK newbie jumping in here to help! I have added the weblink to this hook here and moved the citation to the end of that sentence in the article. I hope this helps, please ping me if this article needs more help to move along in the DYK process! Terasaface (talk) 18:04, 21 July 2020 (UTC)
Hiya thanks for the comment Terasaface, yep that completes the review. Mujinga (talk) 19:15, 21 July 2020 (UTC)