Template:Did you know nominations/See You in My Nightmares

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Kingsif (talk) 21:11, 26 April 2021 (UTC)

See You in My Nightmares

Improved to Good Article status by Kyle Peake (talk). Self-nominated at 10:06, 15 April 2021 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Nice work on the GA. Both hooks are fine (really the same hook just structured differently), I like the first one a little more because it mentions the article of interest earlier in the sentence. Good to go. DanCherek (talk) 05:06, 22 April 2021 (UTC)

DanCherek Thanks for checking this off, I know the only difference was structure but I did that on purpose to see which the reviewer thought flowed better. --K. Peake 06:23, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
@Kyle Peake: Yep, makes sense! To expand a little more, I think that if I saw ALT1 on the main page, I'd be a little more likely to click on We Were Once a Fairytale; whereas with the original I'd be more likely to click on your nominated article just because of the order in which they appear, which is why I have a slight preference for the first one. Cheers, DanCherek (talk) 13:34, 24 April 2021 (UTC)