Template:Did you know nominations/Satyawati Suleiman

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:20, 8 July 2019 (UTC)

Satyawati Suleiman edit

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... that Satyawati Suleiman was the first female archaeology graduate from the University of Indonesia – and one of two overall then? First female: [1]. One of two: "Ketika itu baru dua orang yang menyandang gelar sarjana, Pak Soekmono dan Ibu Satyawati Suleiman"

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Moved to mainspace by Juxlos (talk). Self-nominated at 18:57, 6 June 2019 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook eligibility:

Cited:
Interesting:
Other problems:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: I like the hook more without the "and one of two overall then" part. If you must add that part, how about "and one of the two total"? "Then" sounds awkward and out of place. Bejinhan talks 00:26, 9 June 2019 (UTC)

That works too - though that might imply there's only 2 even today. Juxlos (talk) 07:54, 9 June 2019 (UTC)

Personally, I think the hook is hooky enough without that second part - short and sweet. Everything else is good to go. I've updated the status. Bejinhan talks 10:55, 9 June 2019 (UTC)