- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 00:23, 12 January 2016 (UTC)
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Roy Señeres edit
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that Roy Señeres's presidential bid was the center of jokes in his fellow representatives after he announced it on a briefing in the Philippine House of Representatives?
5x expanded by Angelo6397 (talk). Self-nominated at 15:30, 25 November 2015 (UTC).
Fivefold expanded in the last seven days. Long enough. Hook is fine but can be shorter. No need for QPQ. Well-sourced and neutral but hook is not found on either artcle. Shhhhwwww!! (talk) 07:08, 29 November 2015 (UTC)
- User:Shhhhwwww!!: The hook is now in the article and I also added two alternate hooks. You can pick what's the appropriate one and revise it or suggest a better hook. Thanks!
ALT1: ... that some of Roy Señeres' fellow congressmen found his presidential bid 'funny and unbelievable' after he announced it? –Angelo6397 T A L K! 08:04, 29 November 2015 (UTC)
ALT2: ... that the announcement of Roy Señeres' presidential bid was the 'center of jokes' during a briefing in the Philippine House of Representatives?
- @Angelo6397, the hook needs to be sourced, after the (first or both) period(s). Also, can you use another source besides the Tagalog one. So a third party can verify it. Thank you.Shhhhwwww!! (talk) 03:57, 1 December 2015 (UTC)
Verified reference, good to go. Shhhhwwww!! (talk) 18:08, 7 December 2015 (UTC)
- Scratch that. @Angelo6397, where is it written that it was a "center of jokes?" Either change the hook or add that to the article, otherwise it still needs reworking. Shhhhwwww!! (talk) 18:28, 7 December 2015 (UTC)
- @ Shhhhwwww!! I think this is the proper one. Some congresmen literally joked about it in the reference. -–Angelo6397 T A L K! 14:23, 8 December 2015 (UTC)
ALT3: ... that the announcement of Roy Señeres' presidential bid was the subject of some jokes during a briefing in the Philippine House of Representatives?
- Scratch that. @Angelo6397, where is it written that it was a "center of jokes?" Either change the hook or add that to the article, otherwise it still needs reworking. Shhhhwwww!! (talk) 18:28, 7 December 2015 (UTC)
- @Angelo6397, it is still not written in the article. Not gonna do it for you. Shhhhwwww!! (talk) 15:21, 8 December 2015 (UTC)
- For the new reviewer, the hook is now in written in the article. Thanks for your time @Shhhhwwww!! –Angelo6397 T A L K! 09:03, 20 December 2015 (UTC)
- ALT4: ... that Philippine presidential aspirant Roy Señeres hoped that he would not be declared a "nuisance candidate" by the Comelec during the next elections? Shhhhwwww!! (talk) 12:32, 1 January 2016 (UTC)
. help. New reviewer needed. Shhhhwwww!! (talk) 06:01, 23 December 2015 (UTC)
Article is well expanded and nominated within due time. Copyvio unlikely. QPQ not needed. ALT4 is interesting and sourced. I have sticken ALT3. Now it is good to go. --Human3015Let It Go 22:25, 11 January 2016 (UTC)