- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by BorgQueen talk 10:54, 3 September 2024 (UTC)
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One Room Angel
... that One Room Angel was a remake of Tomarigi, a short story Harada had drawn earlier in their career?
ALT1: ... that Shouta Aoi, who had played the angel in the audio drama of One Room Angel, also performed the theme song to its live-action television drama adaptation?Source: https://natalie.mu/comic/news/543743ALT2: ... that Avu-chan, a close friend of Harada's, composed the theme song for the live-action television drama adaptation of Harada's manga, One Room Angel?Source: https://natalie.mu/comic/news/543743- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Leak 04-13 (Bait Ones)
Created by Lullabying (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 55 past nominations.
lullabying (talk) 05:49, 9 August 2024 (UTC).
Full review is to follow, but before doing so, I would suggest dropping ALT1 and ALT2 because both of them are rather specialist hooks that may require knowledge of Japanese media. The first hook is probably the only suitable option among the three as currently written, but it needs to be rephrased since it isn't clear that "Harada" is in fact the mangaka (after all, Harada is a common Japanese surname). My suggestion would be to change "Harada" to "its artist" since DYK hooks generally should avoid mentioning names of people without articles by name unless necessary. I'd also like to see other additional hook suggestions as while ALT0 is okayish, it's not the best out there and doesn't really scream "hooky". Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 10:49, 16 August 2024 (UTC)
- ALT0a: ... that One Room Angel was a remake of Tomarigi, a short story that the original creator had drawn earlier in their career?
ALT1a: ... that Shouta Aoi, who had portrayed a character in the audio drama of One Room Angel, also performed the theme song to its live-action television drama adaptation?ALT2a: ... that Queen Bee vocalist Avu-chan, a close friend of the creator of One Room Angel, wrote the theme song for its live-action drama adaptation?- Here are other suggestions! lullabying (talk) 01:48, 17 August 2024 (UTC)
- By new suggestions, I was thinking more of different facts altogether, as ALT1/ALT2 and their revisions probably are too specialist as written to meet DYKINT. I've struck the others, so for now only ALT0a is under consideration. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 13:52, 18 August 2024 (UTC)
- ALT4: ... that the angel's wings in the live-action television drama adaptation of One Room Angel took about a month to construct? (Source: https://thetv.jp/news/detail/1167425/)
- lullabying (talk) 03:32, 24 August 2024 (UTC)
- By new suggestions, I was thinking more of different facts altogether, as ALT1/ALT2 and their revisions probably are too specialist as written to meet DYKINT. I've struck the others, so for now only ALT0a is under consideration. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 13:52, 18 August 2024 (UTC)
Article was nominated within seven days of creation. It meets the length requirements as well. I did not detect any close paraphrasing. A QPQ has been done. As the sources are largely in Japanese I will assume good faith on their reliability. Among the hooks, ALT4 is probably the best and appeals to the broadest audience. The source is in Japanese; however, a Google Translate TL confirms the information. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 07:10, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
