- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:43, 27 June 2012 (UTC)
Olga Lipińska edit
- ... that theatre director and TV comedy producer Olga Lipińska (pictured) launched her Cabaret under the Soviet style socialism hoping to make the world a better place?
Created/expanded by Poeticbent (talk). Self nom at 18:44, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
Length, date, overall sourcing, and photo licensing, etc., all good to go. But, the sentence that I am guessing is supposed to support the hook is unsourced. More pressing though, is if that sentence is suppose to be where the hook came from, the hook is not accurate as to the information in the Wikipedia article. I make no judgment on if a source used in the article supports what the hook says, since as far as I know I cannot read Polish. Clarify the beginning sentence in the "Media" section so it matches the hook (or vice versa) and add an inline cite to the sentence. Aboutmovies (talk) 07:19, 23 June 2012 (UTC)
Done. The anchor I created specifically for the hook was placed too far down by accident. My mistake. I just moved it up. It is the same source featured already at the end of that paragraph. I added en extra link to Google translate to show that it matches both. Thanks for the review, Aboutmovies, and for your meticulous attention to detail. Much appreciated. Looking forward to your final approval. Poeticbent talk 17:53, 23 June 2012 (UTC)
- sentence now cited, AGF since source is in Polish. Aboutmovies (talk) 07:18, 24 June 2012 (UTC)
