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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by  Ohc ¡digame! 09:30, 12 February 2014 (UTC)

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No. 11 Elementary Flying Training School RAAF edit

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Instructor and trainee of No. 11 Elementary Flying Training School RAAF, c. 1944

Created by Ian Rose (talk). Self nominated at 15:02, 28 January 2014 (UTC).

  • Note that I consider the image appropriate for the first hook, not the ALT particularly. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 15:06, 28 January 2014 (UTC)
  • Review: Article created the day of the DYK nomination. Citations in every paragraph. Main proposed hook fact is at the end of the lead, but is not included in the body, or cited in the lead. Citations 8 & 9 cover ALT1. So I'd say on ALT1, and on the main hook at this time. – Muboshgu (talk) 20:43, 10 February 2014 (UTC)
  • Tks for reviewing. The exact figure of 2,953 trainees is mentioned/cited in the last paragraph. I wouldn't have thought paraphrasing that to "almost 3,000" was an issue but if it is then feel free to substitute the exact figure... Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 21:10, 10 February 2014 (UTC)
  • Ah, you're right. Didn't notice it in there. It's cited with an offline source, so on the main hook. – Muboshgu (talk) 21:17, 10 February 2014 (UTC)
  • Reiterating Muboshgu's ticks for the ALT1 hook and original hook, respectively. Muboshgu, please put ticks at the beginning of the review where they can be seen by promoters. (Anything not at the left edge is unlikely to be seen.) Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 21:49, 11 February 2014 (UTC)
  • Will do. – Muboshgu (talk) 15:06, 12 February 2014 (UTC)
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