- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by valereee (talk) 20:46, 27 May 2019 (UTC)
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Niayes edit
- ... that the Niayes region of Senegal is important for fishing, market gardening, cattle-grazing and birds? Source: "The whole site is very important in terms of human use, for cattle-grazing, fishing, vegetable, fruit and rice-growing and market gardening" and "The niayes as a whole are particularly important for a wide variety of breeding and wintering waterbirds and also raptors."
- Reviewed: Sommen
Created by Cwmhiraeth (talk). Self-nominated at 08:44, 12 May 2019 (UTC).
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Hook eligibility:
- Cited:
- Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith - Interesting:
- I would not consider this hook interesting, being typical uses for a coastal area.
| QPQ: Done. |
Overall: 
Zerach (talk) 20:33, 12 May 2019 (UTC)
Perhaps another editor could reconsider this rejection. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 08:25, 13 May 2019 (UTC)
- I don't think the hook is terrible, it just feels ordinary: plenty of places are "important for fishing, market gardening, cattle-grazing and birds", and the hook fails to show how the subject is special in this regard. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:10, 14 May 2019 (UTC)
- How about? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:08, 14 May 2019 (UTC)
- I don't think the hook is terrible, it just feels ordinary: plenty of places are "important for fishing, market gardening, cattle-grazing and birds", and the hook fails to show how the subject is special in this regard. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:10, 14 May 2019 (UTC)
- ALT1 ... that Niayes, a region of Senegal important for fishing, market gardening, cattle-grazing and birds, is at risk of desertification?
- ALT2 ... that Niayes, a string of lakes behind sand dunes in Senegal which are designated as an Important Bird Area, is at risk of desertification?
ALT1 and ALT2 are both acceptable (though I think ALT1 is the somewhat more eye-catching hook); French source accepted AGF. Rest of review per Zerach. Should be good to go now. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 14:36, 16 May 2019 (UTC)
