Template:Did you know nominations/Nakhichevan uezd

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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 19:13, 23 October 2022 (UTC)

Nakhichevan uezd

  • ... that the Nakhichevan uezd was home to more than 54,000 Armenians until they perished through the events of 1918–1920 as a result of the Russian Revolution? Source: Hovannisian, Richard G. (1996). The Republic of Armenia. Vol. 3. Berkeley: University of California Press. ISBN 0-520-08803-4.
    • Reviewed:
    • Comment: The article has just become a Good Article.

Improved to Good Article status by Olympian (talk). Self-nominated at 11:31, 11 October 2022 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: @Olympian: Great article. This seems to be your first nomination so no QPQ required. However, I don't think that the hook is that interesting. Your hook feels too vague and lacks enough context to be interesting. I feel as if you should either be more specific in the hook you have or create a different hook altogether. Other than that it would be approved. Onegreatjoke (talk) 13:45, 11 October 2022 (UTC)

Hook is better so I'm approving on good faith. Onegreatjoke (talk) 14:21, 17 October 2022 (UTC)