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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 06:04, 12 May 2012 (UTC)

Music for Our Mother Ocean edit

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  • I'd personally prefer the main hook, as it shows the disparate selection of artists. Also the Beastie Boys are in the news right now, since Adam Yauch passed away. I'm hoping to get this in for May 13, Mother's Day (US).

Created/expanded by JohnnyMrNinja (talk). Self nom at 08:03, 11 May 2012 (UTC)

  • - Sorry it's a late entry but I'm really hoping this gets in for Mother's Day. ▫ JohnnyMrNinja 18:53, 11 May 2012 (UTC)
date and length fine, many sources for the reviews. I would prefer to see a few of the famous names - at least those mentioned in the hook - in the lead and in the article, ref in article. Please fix double mentioning of ref 2 and grammar in "and he singling-out". Perhaps mention MOM in the hook? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:25, 11 May 2012 (UTC)
Thanks for the review. I've addressed the issues mentioned. I don't think I could mention the specific artists in the intro without adding undue weight, as there are dozens of other famous artists involved. I added an additional review at the bottom that mentions all artists by name, which is sourced to the same page as the tracklist at AllMusic. ▫ JohnnyMrNinja 23:48, 11 May 2012 (UTC)
--Gerda Arendt (talk) 05:19, 12 May 2012 (UTC)
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